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Our Eyes

Rating: 5.0

IF WORDS A PICTURE PAINT
AND MUSIC IS MAGIC
TAKING US
OUT OF OURSELVES
THEN EYES, OUR EYES
MEETING FOR THE FIRST TIME
OPEN OUR INNER MUSIC'S PATH
CLOSING THE GAP BETWEEN US
COMPLETING US
OUR HUMAN INTENT TAPPED

WE ARE CONNECTED
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Dr Kamran Haider 02 November 2008

Beautiful thought... I don't care if all alphabets are in capitals... As long as I can grasp the core of this poem, I don't mind breaking any rules... As I believe that there are no rules in poetry... Flow is wonderful... It connects our true inner self to our so called fake conscious... and at same time this bond spreads like an infectious disease... I wish there would be a Pandemic of such infectious connectivity through human souls, and poets like you can help us revitalize this connectivity in this world of dying humanity... Regards, Kamran

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Tj Becker 22 September 2008

You have a romantic heart, and it flows from your pen to write words that entice us all. Very well done; -)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

It is nice poem with a beautiful dimension. I love it and added my 10. However, all capitals are a bit......

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 15 August 2008

nice! keep writing! could you read my poems too? thank you.

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James B. Earley 26 July 2008

'We are connected...bonded for all time'..... Excellent passage... Please read 'Ecstasy.'

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 September 2009

yes when the eyes start to converse...a music of love we start hearing from within...an expressive poem

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Alf Hutchison 23 May 2009

Carol, our eyes are indeed the mirrors of our souls... captured beautifully by your pen... Brilliant Alf

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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2008

wow! ! ! its beautiful. Your poem is small but very true. I truly believe that eyes --the connector-- to that gate of love. A+ and 10+ regards anjali

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 25 November 2008

through music, love can be tasted and sensed. if we are in love, our world become music hall. and our hearts are the musicians. very expressive in simple way! keep writing!

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Blue Eyes 18 November 2008

hi sweety, i love ur poem it is very nice.your father must be proud of u.u have a real talent.

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