Valsa George

Our Love - Poem by Valsa George

Our love is infinite as the sky
On love’s filmy wings we soar high
It has the might of a mountain
And the upward thrust of a fountain

Our love soars like swift birds in flight
With the boon of newer vistas in sight
It is like the sweet lays of a song
All through life, its rhythmic notes do ring

Our love renews itself like the rising sun
Each day in golden flame, it does burn
It is like the life sustaining breath
That shall keep us alive until our death

Our love, hopefully will remain sublime
As a living monument in Time
Even after the sun of our life sets
In heaven we shall sing love’s duets

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

You may see it either as truth or just a longing!

Comments about Our Love by Valsa George

  • Dinesh Nair (4/1/2015 8:16:00 AM)

    Love alone transcends all attributed and prefixed horizons of human life and true love as immortalised here can cast a spell and it flies in the Sun like a web of gossamer of fine fibre. Here is a definite 10 for this beautifully attired poetic piece. Good sharing too, Valsa mada. (Report) Reply

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  • Paul Sebastian (3/20/2015 6:20:00 AM)

    You have sculptured a beautiful image of perfect love! Soaring on the wings of love that never dies...eternal. In four stanzas you had creatively carved it! Thank you for the inspiration! (Report) Reply

  • Josey Alfred (3/17/2015 6:44:00 AM)

    Even after the sun of our live sets
    In heaven we shall sing lovers dutes.
    Very good poem, a feel of love and happiness smoothly flow throughout your poem. Well written and we'll rhymed.
    Thank you for sharing.
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  • Ramesh Rai (3/14/2015 4:37:00 PM)

    Love is the only reason for survival of all creatures. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (3/14/2015 9:48:00 AM)

    Excellent rendition of Our Love All similes and metaphors are apt and sweet. Enjoyed it, Valsa! (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (3/9/2015 9:00:00 PM)

    Beautiful composition. My best wishes to add on to this wonderful love story. (Report) Reply

  • Mihaela Pirjol (3/9/2015 12:58:00 PM)

    This is that kind of love that we all long and hope for...a love, that can endure the passage of time, the very essence of it after the burning. Very much enjoyed reading it! (Report) Reply

  • (3/8/2015 10:41:00 AM)

    Simply outstanding and amazingly composed with sweet are really great in creation....10 (Report) Reply

  • (3/8/2015 5:46:00 AM)

    What a beautiful poem! ....................... (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/7/2015 8:16:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem on love........................... (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/7/2015 6:26:00 AM)

    Our love is taller than the mountain and ever lasting as time. Lovely poem with beautiful lines. Enjoyed it. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (3/7/2015 5:04:00 AM)

    A glorious tribute to immortal love. Exalted, beautiful write! .....10 (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (3/6/2015 12:49:00 PM)

    With so much joy bursting into a vista of love that soars with wings of freedom of happiness, respect and desires of loving each other forever!
    I love this superb write!
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  • Rajesh Thankappan (3/6/2015 10:28:00 AM)

    On the occasion of Holi, you have very beautifully coloured your canvas of love. Beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Michael Mcparland (3/6/2015 5:35:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem and tribute to a true love so wonderful and joyous. Wonderful piece. :) (Report) Reply

  • (3/6/2015 4:53:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem on love. Likes the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/6/2015 4:02:00 AM)

    Love is definitely infinite like sky and can not be measured. Love is like rising sun and shines as well as brings unlimited courage. Love is the living monument of time that we remember always and Love takes us towards DIVINE. Very wonderfully drafted such a beautiful love poem. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/6/2015 3:53:00 AM)

    Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 6, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 16, 2015

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