Our Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Our Love

Rating: 5.0


In the soft silver moonlight
In the paper boat merrily drifting
In the ivory temperature
I see our love blossom.

Sunday, June 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 27 July 2016

And I smell the fragrance of it in Australia, Man..10

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Akhtar Jawad 28 June 2016

A beautiful blossoming of love, a nice four liner.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 June 2016

Love is described in rich soothing imagery. A lovely write with a romantic feel A 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 June 2016

Love and dreams! ! With all the imaginations. Nice work.

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