She was screaming in pain like thunder
pounding out in fear as lightning hinder
Looking out of the window towards the sky
And started dancing in few seconds with joy
Such is the Joy and such is the rejoice
Now she is far from being weathered
Her personality and character gelled together
She took the flight on hope's feather
With pride the lost dignity is gathered
No more she is a disgraceful soul now!
She gained maturity without being old, how?
Beauty and sex appeal together, Wow?
She is out from the self-prison like a dove.....
One always needs to gather courage to come out of self prison. A thoughtful poem.
No more she is a disgraceful soul now! She gained maturity without being old, how? Beauty and appeal together, Wow? She is out from the self-prison like a crow....interesting.... I enjoyed
the words, content and problems suit very well to a woman, but why for heaven's sake, dear Asim Sir, to end with the crow? This poem tells the reader that she has got that final feeling: finally free from her own prison, but the crow is a bad omen and symbolizing the darkest places in life.
Wow DJ liked the flow of your poem, self motivation is the only way to overcome the obstacles. Well done
The flight on hope's feather! ! ! ! Being very courageous. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Now she is far from being weathered Her personality and character gelled together She took the flight on hope's feather With pride the lost dignity is gathered....Fantastic! ! ! !
Life of fairer is very difficult. They go thru many emotional turmoil and at times they need love and at times they need care.
2) As I gave comment here you created a magnificent poem about a woman, I admit if you have taken a male person, the whole drama-point, what makes the poem exiting, will disappear, but why a crow? It rhymes very well with the above end words, but a crow.....? My comment for this gorgeous poem is still the same: a magnificent one, but as I said: a crow is a bad omen. Or shall she turn again in a disgraceful soul? Thank you for sharing this brilliant read, Asim Sir
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The determination to conquer the hard balls thrown in life's path will free us from the bondage of hardships and fear. A wonderful poem well crafted. Very uplifting.10++