M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,438 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Our Regrets.......... - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

We talk more say less
Hence we fail in our deeds.

We think more act less
Hence we miss the opportunity’s bus.

We hear more listen less
Hence we create confusion and chaos

We forget more remember less
Hence friendship and relations are strained.

We empty more fill less
Hence we are hollow and vacant inside.

We conceal more reveal less
Hence we find in doldrums, our trust and faith

We take more give little
Hence charity is not done and we suffer.

We leave a lot unsaid undone
Hence our emotions flow through eyes and heart suffers.

We turn love into a mental illness
We pretend
We deny
And then we regret forever.

Topic(s) of this poem: regret

Form: Couplet

Comments about Our Regrets.......... by M. Asim Nehal

  • (7/27/2016 6:28:00 AM)

    Wise words.man 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (10/7/2015 12:46:00 AM)

    We turn love into a mental illness
    We pretend
    We deny
    And then we regret forever.................it's a great thought
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  • (9/7/2015 2:31:00 AM)

    Very true, simple words with power-packed meaning...........................10 (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/6/2015 11:40:00 PM)

    another wise work on life and our attitude to it.... every line is depicting most valuable truths of our lives. thank you.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/6/2015 1:51:00 PM)

    A comparative poem expressing contradictory attributes that are realistic and undeniable. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 6, 2015

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