Out Our Window On A Breezy Evening....[short; Nature] Poem by Bri Edwards

Out Our Window On A Breezy Evening....[short; Nature]

Rating: 5.0


The sun has finally settled behind the nearby Belmont hills,
but its lingering light, the evening sky, with blue pastel fills.
Our star has warmed another San Carlos April day,
and now westward it recedes, as outside calls a jay.
A few grey clouds were briefly-edged with bright orange for my eye,
but it won't be long before the planet Venus sparkles in the sky.

A fragile birch tree peeks at me through a nearby window,
its limp branches swaying as the wind moves them to and fro.
Beyond the birch, beyond some roofs, a wooded hillside rises,
concealing roosting birds and browsing deer and more nighttime surprises.

(4-23-2012)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i wrote this to send to an old high school friend; it was really written for his wife who was not impressed by a previously sent poem about farting. i think she liked this one better.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 14 April 2016

nice to know that you have a soft spot for nature thanks Bri

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Valsa George 18 September 2015

Beautiful poem, Bri! I haven't read many of your Nature poems! But after reading this I am quite sure, you can handle any subject deftly! A sure 10

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