Outbreak. Poem by Fay Slimm

Outbreak.

Rating: 5.0


Where to run to - where to hide
With flames engulfing all.
Horror stalks the mountainside.
Ash, like snowfakes starts to fall.

Horrendous heat, must make escape.
The winds are gale-force strong.
Leave the homestead, only take
The basics, - before long
It will be gone - no time to think.

Life is in danger here.
All around is on the brink
Of inferno - fire brings fear.
Racing now, the flames are higher.
Trees alight, - will I escape
This terrifying firey
Malastrom, this outbreak
Straight from hell? , - my land
Victoria is burning.

I see a welcome hand
To safety now - I cant return
But bless the folk who came
To rescue me - those they lost
They would have helped the same.

Brave souls as these should be
Remembered, not for today
But always - just to see
Them fighting in this way.
Fire breaks out, - they're there.
Firefighters care.


Tribute to the bravery of the firefighters in Victoria (Australia) - Feb. '09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 10 February 2009

Brave souls as these should be Remembered, not just today But always - just to see Them fighting in this way. Fire breaks out, - they're there. Firefighters care.....Very true...they are the timely savers...infact gods...very good poem10

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Fiona Davidson 10 February 2009

An excellent tribute to the brave men of the fire services Fay...thanks for this...Fi..10++

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Scott Austin 10 February 2009

This is a great tribute to those that risk their lives to save ours…really enjoyed the read. Scott

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Tsira Goge 10 February 2009

Fay, Good support...10... /thank you/ Tsira

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Kris Smith 10 February 2009

True and good tribute to our friends in Australia, our prayers and thoughts are with them 10 +++++ Chris

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Susan Williams 23 April 2019

you caught the desperation and fear so vividly in this piece, well done

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Tony Jolley 19 February 2009

Poignant, Faye, and all the moreso with Allie and Jerry over there. Still haunted by the stories / eye witness accounts of the firefighters in the World Trade Centres heading up the stairwells as the buildings were about to fall. Such are called to bravery every day... I wonder how I would cope with that choice knowing the consequence of getting it wrong................ Tony

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Ann Beard 10 February 2009

A fine tribute Fay, one can only imagine the depth of horror in Melbourne at this time. Kind regards Ann

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Tom Balch 10 February 2009

Well done Fay, great piece to brave men.10 Tom

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 February 2009

Well my brother is there, talked to him on the the phone today, great work Fay...10

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