Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(p) 17 (Sufiyana) You Have Gone - Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

You have gone
But You are here with me
I have abosrbed the fragrance of Your being
Your presence is inside me.My soul can feel it
Sometimes it permeates outside.Others can feel it too
Sometimes it condenses in a dropp of beauty dancing inside me
Sometimes it opiates me and gently rolls me in a land of gossamer dreams
Sometimes it races up to my heart and bursts into a song and i write it down


Comments about (p) 17 (Sufiyana) You Have Gone by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

  • (6/14/2007 7:32:00 PM)

    Add my vote to this one young songstess, this verse sings of the must fervent notes and is flowing like a stream unto its' river.... (Report) Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/9/2007 5:14:00 PM)

    Effulgent imagery abounds this beautiful work, young lady! ...Smoooooth, and so
    very quelling...Very solid crafting, T.O.

    FjR
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/9/2007 5:14:00 PM)

    Effulgent imagery abounds this beautiful work, young lady! ...Smoooooth, and so
    very quelling...Very solid crafting, T.O.

    FjR
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 9, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 9, 2011


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