Saturday, March 3, 2007


Rating: 5.0
With all the pain I feel inside,
Trying to hide what I know you can find.
It's like playing an impossible game of hide-and-seek,
As I am simply getting weak.
It started off as a simple prick,
But this pain has taken shift.
This pain grows stronger everyday because you don’t know the truth,
If I could tell you now,
What you lack to know,
You would see my true colors show.
The weak little girl,
Sad and alone,
No one to love no one to hold.
These tears fall harder as the pain goes on,
However, you still don’t understand the truth of it!
I'm dead!
Ashley Greenslade
Ashley, I am so happy that I came across your is a well written piece of poetry.Sorry to read of your pain, remember though the sun always rises again and things can and will get better.Keep writing as it is good therapy.I look forward to reading your next work soon. Take care of U, =Shelley=
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natasha s. 03 March 2007
the poem is ok, but i think you shouldn't worry so much on making the lines rhyme...the effect would be even better...(that's just my opinion) . ...and cheer up!
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