Pain Poem by Broken heart emo

Pain

Rating: 4.3


All i feel is pain
All i see is tears and blood
my past haunts me evry single second of my life
i cant make it stop
i cant make it go away
please someone make it stop
it hurts
it wont stop
the anger in me wont finish
the hate wont go away
i have locked up everything inside me
with words unsaid
feelings unexpressed
everything kept inside
and there is will remain all enternity

the pain is rushing through my body
please make it stop
please make it go away
i cant bare it anymore
my hands are shivering
my bodys trembling
the pain to strong for me to bare
i cant take it anymore
i feel weak
i cant stop it
please, please
just make it go away
all i want is the pain to go away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 June 2010

‘i have locked up everything inside me/with words unsaid/feelings unexpressed…’ you’ve allayed and lulled your pain thro’ this expressive painful poetry…nice job splendid …enjoyed… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Rijad Islamovic 09 May 2010

birth, pain, pain, pain, pain, pain..... death..... let's end the pain already T.T

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loNeLY AnGel 08 May 2010

i can relate to this poem 10000%.............

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Elena Sandu 26 April 2010

Oh dear if the pain comes from the broken heart then there is no one to make it go away but self..must find the will..out of the house to get, most helpful usually mother nature it would be..go watch its beauty every day, observe, and pacience have, one day you'll see the pain away to be..may happiness come in your way!

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