Pain Of A River. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Pain Of A River.

Rating: 5.0

The river's pain is like a song,
A melody that's been so long,
A refrain that's been sung so strong,
It echoes through the ages long.

It flows through mountains, valleys deep,
Through forests dark and forests sleep,
It carries life and death and dreams,
And all the secrets that it gleams.

Monday, October 2, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: river
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gordon Walter 03 October 2023

Rivers are in pathetic condition, nobody understand their cry nor anyone is concerened about. This is the right forum to raise such issues and spread awareness. Awesome work.

1 0 Reply
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 October 2023

Yes, rivers do cry. But how many understand their sorrow, Very few.

0 0 Reply
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 October 2023

Thank you Asim ji for this heart touching poem.......Top marks and to my favourite

0 0 Reply
Rebecca Navarre 16 October 2023

As the rivers speak our hearts should listen! .. Endless 10'S and Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++ And Thank you for sharing this! ..

0 0 Reply
Rebecca Navarre 16 October 2023

A very powerful and deeply heart touching song! ..

0 0 Reply
Suzon Albert 15 October 2023

You have raised a valid point. We are not generous towards nature.

0 0 Reply
Denis Mair 10 October 2023

This poem puts me in a mood to walk beside a river and sense its secrets.

0 0 Reply
LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 October 2023

Totally a masterpiece Bravo! ! ! !

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success