Jason Grant


Painfull Suffering - Poem by Jason Grant

Dagger of pain,
kepper of souls,
why must it rain,
why have goals,
why must my soul be torn,
why must i be scorn,
seasons change,
people go dreanged,
souls lift,
bodies rot,
whats left in this world,
fight with all your might,


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  • The devils Girl (2/21/2012 12:30:00 PM)

    I love this poem so much (Report)Reply

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  • The devils Girl (2/8/2012 8:56:00 AM)

    ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS I LOVE IT AND THAT SUMS IT UP: D (Report)Reply

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  • Devils Favorite Child Blade (12/13/2011 12:21:00 PM)

    thank you all for these kind words and the last line i had to censor it because the wont let me use duck change the D to Fand and i'd would have written 'duck this with all my might'. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/28/2011 6:15:00 PM)

    This is a good poem, your emotions were portrayed well, nice job. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/22/2011 9:15:00 AM)

    Strong and powerful..good use of words.
    -SG
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  • Romeo Della Valle (11/10/2011 8:27:00 PM)

    Bravo! A very powerful and well penned write that clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! Keep it up! Thank you for sharing! God Bless You for always! Romeo from New York City.... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/10/2011 9:00:00 AM)

    Good work and you write some neat poetry KEEP IT UP! ! ! :) :) (Report)Reply

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  • (11/10/2011 8:41:00 AM)

    Strong emotion in this poem. I like it. Great job! (Report)Reply

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  • (11/7/2011 9:19:00 AM)

    wow that was amazing so much said in so little bit of worods it was jus tamazing good job (Report)Reply

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  • (11/4/2011 11:50:00 AM)

    I like the whole meaning and the element of the poem and the positive outlook line - i liked to read about might part - which is' fight with all your might', the only thing is that it felt a bit out of sync.

    you write nice the thought is real good too.
    keep writing.
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  • (11/2/2011 9:17:00 AM)

    A great poem really liked it. A great write. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 2, 2011



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