Dagger of pain,
kepper of souls,
why must it rain,
why have goals,
why must my soul be torn,
why must i be scorn,
seasons change,
people go dreanged,
souls lift,
bodies rot,
whats left in this world,
fight with all your might,
I like the whole meaning and the element of the poem and the positive outlook line - i liked to read about might part - which is' fight with all your might', the only thing is that it felt a bit out of sync. you write nice the thought is real good too. keep writing.
wow that was amazing so much said in so little bit of worods it was jus tamazing good job
Good work and you write some neat poetry KEEP IT UP! ! ! :) :)
thank you all for these kind words and the last line i had to censor it because the wont let me use duck change the D to Fand and i'd would have written 'duck this with all my might'.
This is a good poem, your emotions were portrayed well, nice job.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great poem really liked it. A great write.