Sudden obstacles and confusion in life,
Anxiety and fear merge with life's path,
We need to separate confusion soon more,
Unthinking behaviour does not allow this,
But we have to counter and shut down,
Panic feelings will no longer last.
While values are learnt,
Inner conscience becomes pure.
Purity has deep control on mind,
Divine love and grace unite,
Fearlessness grows gradually,
Panic breaks into pieces,
Rain of emotion sings,
Winning song of joy,
Mind revives,
Originality,
It matters,
It sings,
It acts,
It sees,
Beauty,
Inner
Core
Holds,
Joy,
is
Jo
is
I.
A powerful write with a meaningful message on life. In life we always encounter obstacles. To counteract such obstacles, we have deep values that have been embedded in our life. Beautifully crafted write.10+++++
A nice meditation on how to control anxiety and fear. Interesting ending where the lines get smaller and seem to fall into themselves, deeper into their own consciousness.
nice line- While values are learnt, Inner conscience becomes pure.
Beautiful poem in a capturing format.....! Yes, Confusion and chaos can be driven out by conscious efforts!
While values are learnt, Inner conscience becomes pure. Great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Purity has deep control on mind, Divine love and grace unite... superbly drawing, there are many mountains one must surmount to get through in life, panic strikes at many turns, to rise us or to drown us, how we respond is important, art and love are the noblest of salvations. This poem is a joy of how to live unconquered by fear.10