Panic Breaks Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Panic Breaks

Rating: 5.0


Sudden obstacles and confusion in life,
Anxiety and fear merge with life's path,
We need to separate confusion soon more,
Unthinking behaviour does not allow this,
But we have to counter and shut down,
Panic feelings will no longer last.

While values are learnt,
Inner conscience becomes pure.
Purity has deep control on mind,
Divine love and grace unite,
Fearlessness grows gradually,
Panic breaks into pieces,
Rain of emotion sings,
Winning song of joy,
Mind revives,
Originality,
It matters,
It sings,
It acts,
It sees,
Beauty,
Inner
Core
Holds,
Joy,
is
Jo
is
I.

Wednesday, July 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 11 July 2018

Purity has deep control on mind, Divine love and grace unite... superbly drawing, there are many mountains one must surmount to get through in life, panic strikes at many turns, to rise us or to drown us, how we respond is important, art and love are the noblest of salvations. This poem is a joy of how to live unconquered by fear.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 July 2018

A powerful write with a meaningful message on life. In life we always encounter obstacles. To counteract such obstacles, we have deep values that have been embedded in our life. Beautifully crafted write.10+++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2019

Obstacles! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Captain Cur 15 July 2018

A nice meditation on how to control anxiety and fear. Interesting ending where the lines get smaller and seem to fall into themselves, deeper into their own consciousness.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2018

nice line- While values are learnt, Inner conscience becomes pure.

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Valsa George 12 July 2018

Beautiful poem in a capturing format.....! Yes, Confusion and chaos can be driven out by conscious efforts!

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Akhtar Jawad 12 July 2018

While values are learnt, Inner conscience becomes pure. Great poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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