Paltry Pitfall Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Paltry Pitfall
From early morning to late evening
People do something for their earning.
In many way they do earn,
They expect their children to learn.
An officer goes office in time,
Sometime he does fetch a crime.
Attendants go office in a bus,
They are to obey to their boss.
In each and every work or journey,
Learning knowledge or earning money.
Paltry pitfall comes in way,
It falls in works or children’s play.
Some feel bore disliking it,
In their progress they have split.
Strong witty persons never mind,
They treat it like a rind.
Pray to God in every morning,
Avoid paltry pitfall’s feeling.
Road is stretched up and down,
Pitfall or advantage is our crown.
Poet describes about the trifling pitfall in our every day works. Many person works in many ways. Some earn money or some learn knowledge. Officers work in offices. Sometimes they fetch pitfalls. Person in journey or in earning money face pitfalls. Students in their reading or children in playing face paltry pitfall. Some persons feel bore and they dislike it. But witty persons never think about. They treat it like a hard cover of a fruit. Poet says, “Pray God regular and get peace which can remove paltry pitfall. Road is up and down, so also our life goes in up and down. We should treat pitfall or advantage as our crown” This is the theme of the poem in brief. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
Glossary
Paltry – trifling
Pitfall – unsuspected danger or difficulty
Great advice. Love this bright refreshing write. I am feeling the pitfall at present.
There is much truth in your poem. At times we all get bored and frustrated with our jobs, but we must persist. There are many reasons to keep going - feeding our families, maintaining a proper place to live, children's education. These are good reasons and give us the motivation we need. You express it all so well in this inspiring poem.
Truly said, life is subjected to pitfalls but the road IS not the same, it's up down and straight subjected to change.Loved reading the poem
In their progress they have split! Along the ways of the muse of life. Nice work.
Pitfalls, paltry to begin with bu grow and are no more paltry. Yes, one need be wary of them, well said.
This is truly a lovely poem that I love at each moment to read again and again.
picture of Angel mia LOVE xAdorable and so true tfs blessings dear xoxoxo 15 Jul 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Kantanka Addo- Osafo xi like your last line. good rhyming 15 Jul 2015 by Kantanka Addo- Osafo | Reply picture of Mfena Ortswen xReally nice. I like it. 15 Jul 2015 by Mfena Ortswen | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xAbsolutely right. Thank you for your wise advice and thank you for sharing this pedagogic poem. There is oft something to be learned. 17 Jul 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Nikunj Sharma xthe importance of doing one's karma and making use of even the adverse circumstance to one's advantage is the essence of the journey of life.... i like it 18 Jul 2015 by Nikunj Sharma | Reply picture of Rohan ******* xthis is beautiful sir.... 19 Jul 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of Drake Banner xReally great, it's full of truth. 27 Jul 2015 by Drake Banner | Reply
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 9:43:53 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A nicely written and insightful poem