Path Of Love(Rubaiyat) Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Path Of Love(Rubaiyat)

Rating: 5.0


I passed by many rosy blooms
The garden sheltered no glooms
Inhale, a voice said, fragrance divine
Intoxicating, more than any wine

Quiet as the midnight face of sky
Inaudible was my heart's joy
Stillness danced tipsily in me
Sober, a lover could not be.


Nosheen Irfan © 2016
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Path Of Love(Rubaiyat)
Monday, June 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry Middleton 13 June 2016

Lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Nosheen Irfan 13 June 2016

Thank u Barry. This is my last Rubaiyat for today. lol. I must mention that our dear friend Daniel Brick has inspired me to write Sufi-inspired poems.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2022

I like THE PATH OF LOVE tremendously, it has something mysterious, but I assure you, this is a sterling poem full of Beauty.5 Stars Full. Excellent Rubaiyat, brilliant Path Of Love, I adore the words here presented.

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Daniel Brick 24 June 2016

Wonder accompanying painting of DERVISHES IN ECSTATIC DANCE! I'm getting dizzy! This is a song in words, the music is provided by Nature, the dance is our everyday lives charged with joy.

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M Asim Nehal 17 June 2016

SUPERB.........................................................................................................................1000++

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Susan Williams 16 June 2016

Sober, a lover could not be.- - - that is true, isn't it? This poem has been dancing with love, I can tell, it is just iridescent with it. Beautiful words strung in lovely phrases. Excellent. 10

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Nosheen Irfan 17 June 2016

Thanku so much Susan. This is Sufi-inspired attempt by me. I'm glad you like it.

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 June 2016

Hi, Inaudible was my heart's joy/stillness danced tipsily in me/sober, a lover could not be! This is exquisitely worded feelings of love. True, Nosheen, a lover cannot be sober. Therefore you have the word, deewana! The exuberance of love is brought out very easily, in so little words, and underneath, almost hidden, the spiritual inclination. Enjoyed reading. Thank you Nosheen.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 June 2016

Your comments add to the meaning of the poem. I thank u so much for ur worthy comments.

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