Patience Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

Patience



Sky is dark
Clouds mar the show
The sun is brought down on it knees
Out of the blue
Rainbow brings some solace
Life is bound to sustains itself
With positive thoughts
And outlook
Darkness proves to be momentary
Only Momentary
Those who are not in hurry
Sky gets clear
And the sun shines bright again.
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Monday, October 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Negative thoughts depress and positive thoughts uplift.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 12 October 2014

Beautiful poem with great message. Very true said, waiting patiently for the sun to shine bright again would be better than bringing sun down to knees. Let the sun shine high in sky, also our thoughts shine in sky. loved the positive message it carried. Loved reading it.

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Ging Taping 11 October 2014

There is sunshine always after the dark clouds...All we need is Patience while waiting for the sun to come out. :) ging

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 08 October 2014

Clouds mar the show and sun is brought down on its knees and shines bright with great patience. Very beautiful poem that talks about patience and its power. Excellent work.

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Valsa George 06 October 2014

Patience brings rich dividends! Seeing something unpleasant, we often come to a negative conclusion! But if we are ready to wait for a little more time with patience, we can see things taking a brighter turn! Enjoyed!

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Gajanan Mishra 06 October 2014

life is bound to sustain itself, good writing, thanks.

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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