Understanding and love make peace work
Human DNA though cannot be banked upon
War mongers keep selling their wares
Will to survive too dares hawks to strike
Fire unable to differentiate
Hate taking over the senses
Visible become the scars on humanity
Yet dawn doesn't wait for darkness to flee
Love makes survival a better option
Understanding paves the way for smooth transition
War becomes the casualty, peace rejoice and fly
Like a dove flees from the cage of inhibitions
To soar in the vast sky.
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'Yet dawn doesn't wait for darkness to flee' It is this thought that gives hope to humanity! Peace and not war is the solution to most of the ills of the world..! Progress blossoms only in the fertile soil of peace....! A very relevant thought in this strife ridden times!
You said it all. Peace at work is essential. According to A. F Stoner; 'Every bad working relationship is a lost opportunity'. Well done and thanks for sharing
A great metaphoric poem on tday's political world. Nice to read u again.
Looking at the present picture of broken peace, bloodshed and racial attack sometimes, I wonder- - -Are we really human, or are we going back to primitive age? - - Hate taking over the senses......Reconciliation is urgently needed to end up the scene of hatred.
A wonderful poem conceived and composed with a deep sincerity...very logically developed argument...the first line is an apt introduction...not a single word is without purpose...a studded piece with all the lines beautiful in it....congratulations on writing this piece!
wonderful thought-provoking poem, since we have to be here, we have to build this planet with love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A thought provoking poem. Very true said fire is unable to differentiate and peace is set on Fire, killing many innocent ones. Whom to blame, human DNA cannot be relied upon where everything can be attained through love and peace! Beautiful write. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.