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For the greater good
We pause, fisted hammer
Short on the anvil
Stake this reputation
On the manufacture
On the creation
Of supposition –
Where there were oak
Tree forests, there’s
Now just us, not so

Full of life or yesterday’s
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Amberlee Carter 02 October 2006

this is very well said...i wish I had more to write in way of a comment...sorry I'm at a loss for words now... Always, amberlee

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 01 October 2006

A phenomenal write! Bravo!

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Tranquil Ocean 18 September 2006

And you made us pause from singing our rhymes, clanging our chimes....and think... TO

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Nalini Hebbar 18 September 2006

kelly...i hope we are not late...i am an ecologist and care very deeply about the environment...lovely poem...great flow and theme...love...nalini

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nn mn 18 September 2006

Great work = but don't blame me. It's not my asphalt! (smile!)

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Steve Hagget 18 September 2006

great use of language and a really well thought through poem - I enjoyed it, Steve

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Tony Duffy 18 September 2006

And again the elements play a big part - I particularly like the asphalt meeting the sea!

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