Peace In A Bubble Poem by Aufie Zophy

Peace In A Bubble



If you manage to be grateful for a moment or two
a giant bubble of peace starts to envelop you
But then more often than ever should be,
for small imperfections or a bit of ennui
we smash the peace, turn it into nought
with bouts of anger and negative thought.

Thursday, December 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: anger
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 16 December 2018

Poetry full excellence, but my patience goes round and round and round. I agree with your words, but my heart is not there. I am female, this is truly a male's poetry. At least I am honest in my comments and my compliments are greatest for you. If you manage to be grateful for a moment or two a giant bubble of peace starts to envelop you.......................so loveliest! A 10 full vote. G.B.U.Amen.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 December 2018

Peace is positive act where as anger is negative. You have so nicely delineated this poem on peace and angeer. Thanks for sharing.10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2018

Wow yes true, impressively said in choice great wording and superb rhyming. Anger destroys blessed peace yeahh. Kudos for such a great poem, keep writing forever more.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 December 2018

Aufie, such a well expressed poem....

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