People Next Door-2 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

People Next Door-2

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I see your dog
Having a morning walk
Each fine day.

With the richest
Young man at its
Call, at its bay.

I see your dog
Breakfast on a table
Just few yards away

From the most beautiful
Lady of our world
Feeding it meat fry.

I see your dog
Just after the lunch
On velvet cushions lay

A cosy and deep sleep
To keep it happy, warm
Free from a fly.

I see your dog
Ride a car in the aft
With the angel of the town

Sitting abreast it,
Her gown cladding scanty
Her bare, fair skin.

I see your dog
Partying in the Evening
With the VIPs of the city

Mermaids in the veils,
Kings of the sales
Patting on its fur

While I wait at,
There a lay man
For everyone at the door.

Saturday, August 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,love and life,neighbor,people,sensitivity,social behaviour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabita Sahoo 19 August 2017

I see your dog Partying in the Evening With the VIPs of the city Mermaids in the veils, Kings of the sales Patting on its fur While I wait at, There a lay man For everyone at the door. Unfortunately a security guard has less importance than a Dog. Sensible poem. Thanks for it.10 for the poem shared.

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Rajnish Manga 20 August 2017

A reader will not miss the sarcasm for the people next door for whom their dog is far more important than a man outside. Makes interesting reading. Thanks a lot.

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Thanks Sir for these gracious lines about the poem.

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Thanks for the lovely comment.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 17 November 2017

I see your dog Partying in the Evening With the VIPs of the city Beautifully crafted.thank you for sharing this poem 10+++

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D Priyanka Singh 24 September 2017

I see your dog Partying in the Evening With the VIPs of the city Men inferior to dogs..these nasty neighbours. Nicely penned satire.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 14 September 2017

I see your dog Ride a car in the aft With the angel of the town Dogs of rich people are luckier than most of our people. Nice poem. Thanks poet.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 24 August 2017

Mermaids in the veils, Kings of the sales Patting on its fur While I wait at, There a lay man For everyone at the door. While dogs are preferred to men at door, this world of rich and privileged have little to do for the people around. Shocking to read about that. Thanks poet for the nice work. 10++ for it.

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Anita Aparajita Das 24 August 2017

I see your dog Partying in the Evening With the VIPs of the city Mermaids in the veils, Kings of the sales Patting on its fur While I wait at, There a lay man For everyone at the door. A great comparison between a beast and a human being in eyes of rich men. Thanks for this lovely attempt. 10+ for the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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