Petrified* Poem by Daniel Y.

Petrified*

Rating: 5.0


It begins like all the others,
in blatant disrepair
I used to wish for something
new and beautiful. Life-full, but then,
Hope runs away; my love becomes a somber statue
nostalgic for its silver lining
it loses shine, rusts, and dies.
After some despair has passed
I end in willful submission.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
*Two poems in one. The second is read by lines aligned in the vertical margin.
(line 1, line 4, line 7; line 2, line 5, etc.) Notice how context changes tone.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 04 February 2014

Very clever Daniel. Good one.

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