Picturing >>> Poem by Manonton Dalan

Picturing >>>

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a group of feet waiting
for morning ride to work
talking minutes to greatest
there are laughs, smiles
lunch boxes bearing weights
cold deflected; heavy coats

bus comes to slowing stop
door open homeward feet out
weary, hurry, vanish in park
cranking engines broke silence
took off in a morning light
am so happy I saw all that

Monday, December 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: work
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 15 December 2015

Good thoughts and poem. We all need to appreciate the world we live in. TFS

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 December 2015

Talking minutes to greatest smile gives new essence in imagery you have shared here. Wise sharing done.10

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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