Beach Poems: 430 / 500

Pine Needles Beach

Rating: 5.0

Pine needles on grass
Spreading like a fresh brown beach:
A beach of needles.

This is our first time
We see this with our own eyes:
The beach with our pines.

It's so beautiful!
A grove of tall green pine trees
On beach of needles.

On this Fall morning
And from our clay tennis court
We found this pine beach.

It's a pure beauty!
We enjoy our new pine beach
And south-flying geese.

NHIEN NGUYEN MD
10/11/2020
At Cat Paradise

Monday, October 12, 2020
Beach Poems: 430 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful,fall,pine
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My wife and I played tennis this morning.
Strong winds of last few days bought down all brown needles of our white pine trees which appear rejuvenated with their pure green while their fresh brown needles weave a thick carpet on the ground that looks like a brown sand beach
Above our heads, geese are flying South as they migrate.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dung Nguyen 12 October 2020

Your new Senryu poem is excellent! Thanks for sharing this beautiful Pine Needles Beach poem!

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Kimkhue Nguyen 12 October 2020

What a beautiful poem for Autumn season! I enjoy very much reading your poems.

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Kim Nguyen 12 October 2020

Thanks for sharing this new, beautiful poem. Enjoy your Autumn time!

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Pamela Lutwyche 12 October 2020

It's nice to see something for the first time and I hope you see it again ??

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