I would love to let it go
Would then love to see it grow
Love to see it bloom one day
To pluck its fruits ripened in the sunray -
Let me hope that day is not too far away
It will surely come fast once on its way
Go now, plant the seed, without demur or delay!
N.B.The first word of each line of the poem, read vertically,forms a sentence which is identical to the first sentence of the poem i.e. ' I would love to let it go.' The last line is a self- incantation to act fast.
You have great idea to see a tree to grow and to reap the sweet fruit. One day it will surely come fast as first product of own action. Planting a sweet seed is very much important. An excellent and thoughtful poem is very well penned...10
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A lovely poem displaying love for nature and observation of stages of growth of a plant along with it's stages. Well deserved poem of the Day.
Lovely poem with multifunctions, about a fruit I know too well. Mango has a very good taste and one of my favourite fruits. CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. God's Blessings in Abundance.
Let me hope that day is not too far away It will surely come fast once on its way Go now, plant the seed, without demur or delay! living in hope.. symbolical.. tony
I would love to let it go, but it stays with me in my mind and I can not forget the robust fruits of its emotion and feeling.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Magnificent but not as good as my beautiful pearls. I can't congratulate you.
You are a mean person.
What's wrong with you, Dill Pickle? Why can't you congratulate someone on his achievement?
Put you mouth in a bottle instead of poems.