Rajesh Thankappan

Gold Star - 12,052 Points (Guwahati)

A Musical Entreaty - Poem by Rajesh Thankappan

I blew air and the pipe piped
A tune full of joy and delight,
I blew the pipe for sometime on
The tune soon turned into a song.

Had I left the pipe alone
It would never have gifted me a song,
So let’s make good the opportunities of life
O my sweetie, come be my wife!

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The opportunities of life should be harnessed judiciously, for they don't come our way too often. (Written on 21.03.2015)

Comments about A Musical Entreaty by Rajesh Thankappan

  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/26/2016 12:25:00 AM)

    Nice piece of work! To use the opportunities of life. (Report) Reply

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  • Rajesh Thankappan (2/29/2016 11:18:00 AM)

    Dear Bri, Though the poem isn't about me how I wish it should have been me! Thanks for reviewing the poem and for your appreciation. (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (2/28/2016 7:08:00 PM)

    you old 'romantic', you! ! the female readers should appreciate this. did SHE say yes? or isn't this about you?

    well, though a male, i appreciated this. :) bri

    p.s. thanks for Poet's Note.
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  • Lyn Paul (4/1/2015 5:12:00 PM)

    Had you left the pipe alone you would not have made us all smile. You just made me think of the Pied Piper.
    Thank You
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    Denis Mair (2/24/2016 6:26:00 PM)

    Thank you for your smile, apt and quick like Rajesh Thankappan's punch lines.

  • Kavya . (3/30/2015 1:38:00 AM)

    the last line just was a swift turn to the whole of the poem...very beautiflly you have highlighted a message that whatever opportunity comes our way, we must make good use of it, rather repent at a later stage (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (3/24/2015 12:22:00 AM)

    For those who have eyes, gems are strewn on our way! We need pick them! If we can polish them with our effort, they will shine with sparkling brilliance! The metaphor of the flute with the melody from it is quite striking! (Report) Reply

  • Mihaela Pirjol (3/23/2015 3:41:00 AM)

    A wise message conveyed beautifully, with an unexpected and sweet line at the end. Loved it! (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (3/22/2015 5:00:00 AM)

    When patience and perseverance go hand in hand, the result is always music to the ears. Let it be a duet with your muse. Let there be a lasting celebration. Thanks, for sharing this poem, Rajesh ji. (Report) Reply

  • Rajesh Thankappan (3/22/2015 3:57:00 AM)

    Though I am not a complete introvert Rajendran-ji, I do certainly admit to such tendencies. Thanks for reviewing the poem and for your wonderful comments. (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (3/22/2015 12:33:00 AM)

    WOW! What a message! And that call to the sweetie is the icing on the cake. How did you call yourself an introvert recently, Rajesh-ji? ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 22, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, March 23, 2015

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