Plateau Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Plateau

Rating: 5.0


Streams of thoughts stay within
Loaded pen waiting to pour on paper thin
The words, the prose and the verse
Standstill, my poetic universe

Crumpled papers and the littered floor
Jammed for the time being, my intellect's door
Deliberate attempts don't help the flow
Worries of depletion in my mind grow
No signs of rain or the rainbow
At times, I am
A hapless poet on poetic plateau

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you call yourself hapless but this poetry doesn't say so... nice write...

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wow..... amazingly written...... i love.

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Sandhya S N 18 July 2009

may be dear but still U rocked in those lines regards sandhya

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TOATALLY agree with Bhaswat Chakraborty.... Besides the stirrings from the Intellect in us; the Blessings from the GRACE is also ESSENTIAL - for Creation to HAPPEN.

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 16 July 2009

This is what the ladies call 'cute'. If your 'block' is so good, then one can imagine how good your flow is....very well expressed.......10 from me.

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Marilyn Lott 29 October 2009

Oh yes, add me to the collection of poets who can identify! Writing isn't always easy but when it's in your blood you just have to do it. Loved your poem, Nikunj! '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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I can relate to this poem, as most poets would. Creativity is not always forthcoming but I try to believe it will come again, and eventually it does. I just listen for a word said by someone or remember something from another time. This is very well written Nikunj. 10 love Karin

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Lady Grace 26 July 2009

to be a poet is a difficult task....okey..this is it.... writing is an art, isn't it? so making poetry is an art too...agree? oh, , , this one, , hope u will not disagree....to be hapless isn't it an art? hhehhehehehe...lavs this dear friend...kisses

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Deborah Cromer 23 July 2009

Writing about that which is experienced by others, brings you closer together with everyone. There is an understanding here that is related too. You are really getting in touch with what works. Nice job! You must be taking you work very seriously, it is really showing in your writing. :) Deborah Cromer

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Subroto Chatterjee 22 July 2009

In this matter, you've got company from PH members.... Cheers. Subroto

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