Play Me Like A Piano Poem by Chris Newlash

Play Me Like A Piano

Rating: 4.7


Wind me up and watch me go,
Play me like a piano,
Touch and play every key,
Press down the ivory.

Take control, it isn't hard.
Tune each note, lay down the card,
Bend the noise and manipulate,
Take control and dominate,

Sit and play and press and pound,
Uncomforable? Then change the sound.
Wind me up and watch me go,
Play me like a piano.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this is actualy good, which suprises me... Zane, or should i call your Mr. begger?

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, , , , , , 19 June 2009

ahh that's fully awesome i love the rhyth to it

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Aamnah Akhtar 19 June 2009

if this is not poetry somebody show me some.. spectacular, no exaggerations...

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Patrick McFarland 19 June 2009

Very well metered Chris. Rhyming go with piano and key with ivory for example show a sense of maturity I would expect from an older, more experienced writer. Good job.

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Alf Hutchison 19 June 2009

Hello Chris...this has rhyme and rhythm and flows well...I enjoyed it very much.. thanks for the invite...Cheers Alf

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can you play me like a cello? : p very nice read.: D

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Courtney Carrots 22 June 2009

wow this is very beautiful. you've made a beautiful creation. -courtney

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Surya . 22 June 2009

shows up you as a genuine personality. very well conceived and written. voted10 surya

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Surya . 22 June 2009

shows up you as a genuine personality. very well conceived and written. voted10 surya

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Laila lili 19 June 2009

Mmm........it is very nice and its expression very strong and it touches my soul keep on your writting laila lili

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