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Take my own life end it all.
Will you catch me when I fall?
On my hand and knees I crawl.
No longer standing big and tall.

Someone help, mercy me.
Take away my agony.
Cleaning up this tragedy.
Save me from, misery.
Bob Gibson 25 September 2008
A very well penned poem Chris, the young take life to seriously
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Ken E Hall 25 September 2008
Hi -well done with this one lots of young people end their lives if only they could write a message like this one, regards Ken e Hall
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Cory The Alchemist 24 September 2008
I feel this poem has a lot of power in it. It is very hard to write a poem that stirs up such great angst in the reader but you did it perfectly. Well done.
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Sarah Abdullah 24 September 2008
Someone help, mercy me. Take away my agony. Cleaning up this tragedy. Save me from, misery. We all got a part of us that need to be saved VERY GOOD i LOVED IT
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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 23 September 2008
Utmost despair speaking out of this poem.
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Lauren Watkins 23 September 2008
Hey. The appeal you end with, for someone else to save you is really well written. Remember the strength you have within yourself, though.
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Cathleen Hodgkinson 22 September 2008
'Take my own life end it all.' well, please remember that taking your life is a permanent solution to a temporary problem...We've all had problems at your age. We all feel pain...No one is exempt...but as you become older, you will learn the 'tools' you need within yourself to weather life's difficulties. I agree with Linda Farr, life is about change, situations and feelings....a never ending journey. Be well Chris.
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Linda Moore 22 September 2008
You are an expressive writer, Misery is not a good feeling, although we go through bad times, we must always choose Life. Our whole life is about change, situations, feelings and so on.
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Ershad Mazumder 22 September 2008
Yes, more than 10 for you. I like short pems with deep meaning. Long poems are very narrative.Poetry is not essay or report.
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Great poem. Showing how a brief of words can show endless possibility of deep emotions
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