Take my own life end it all.
Will you catch me when I fall?
On my hand and knees I crawl.
No longer standing big and tall.
Someone help, mercy me.
Take away my agony.
Cleaning up this tragedy.
Save me from, misery.
Wow... u were right i do like that... thats how i felt the other week... weird
this is a really good poem and i like how it expresses how you might have felt
Great poem. Showing how a brief of words can show endless possibility of deep emotions
Yes, more than 10 for you. I like short pems with deep meaning. Long poems are very narrative.Poetry is not essay or report.
A very well penned poem Chris, the young take life to seriously
Hi -well done with this one lots of young people end their lives if only they could write a message like this one, regards Ken e Hall
I feel this poem has a lot of power in it. It is very hard to write a poem that stirs up such great angst in the reader but you did it perfectly. Well done.
Someone help, mercy me. Take away my agony. Cleaning up this tragedy. Save me from, misery. We all got a part of us that need to be saved VERY GOOD i LOVED IT
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this perfectly describes some of the moments ive had in my life...nice write