Jacqui Broad

Rookie - 49 Points (10 Dec '84)

Playtime - Poem by Jacqui Broad

I want to share a joke,
but your face is a frown.
Curiously, I continue to poke,
turning myself into a clown.
You watch with impenetrable eyes
how I suffer in my struggle
to hear your laughing cries -
I'm learning the art to juggle,
instead of playing on the playground
where other kids want to join.
So, when you're ready, come around,
and we'll play flip-a-coin,
just so I can see you crumbling,
when love comes rolling and tumbling...


Comments about Playtime by Jacqui Broad

  • Federico del Corazón (12/19/2011 3:38:00 PM)

    love the simple joy this brings (Report)Reply

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  • (11/12/2011 2:53:00 PM)

    Oh Jacqui! This is an awesome song. If you sing this song in-front of me, i will stop everything thing including breath to give one complete attention.....
    'I want to share a joke,
    but your face is a frown.
    Curiously, I continue to poke,
    turning myself into a clown.'
    Your poem has A - Z, right to left, north to south, east - west! it is even spread horizontally and vertically in the air! Be strong! Don't think wrong! Hope for the best! 10+++ + :) :) :)
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  • (10/6/2011 6:16:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful piece of work Jacqui...I love ho you transformed the mood from sad and almost anoying (Line 1-4) to happy and full of love (The last two lines) . love must always come at the end.... Wow! i like it! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 6, 2011



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