UMBELINA FROTA Linhares Pimenta Bastos

Please - Poem by UMBELINA FROTA Linhares Pimenta Bastos

Hold my hand,
Please, hold it,
I feel lonely, very lonely,
I want a friend hand, confident,
So that I can go ahead.
Hold me!
Hug me!
Sometimes I feel myself falling down,
Twisting with my solitude,
I shout, nobody answers,
Only the nigth, with its silence
And its darkness
Just a star shining,
As wanting to show,
The way to tread.
I walk lonely, as in the past,
Sobbing as always.
I feel cold in my soul,
Just a tear calm me down.
Lonely, very lonely! ...
My heart complains
Please! Listen to my scream!
Hold my hand,
Please, hold it! ...

Tradução – Nelson Francisco de Andrade

Comments about Please by UMBELINA FROTA Linhares Pimenta Bastos

  • (12/18/2008 6:12:00 AM)

    Wonderful work.Engenders feelings of protection and concern. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/7/2008 5:26:00 PM)

    .......................poignant and beautifully written by a mature mind. Cheers, Jerry (Report) Reply

  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (12/4/2008 12:54:00 PM)

    your heartprint, touching love poem, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (12/1/2008 2:38:00 PM)

    My heart complains
    Please! Listen to my scream!
    great lines... people will hear just wait and see.good job.
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  • (12/1/2008 2:27:00 PM)

    awwwwwwww. that's so cool. thats how i write when i want a great friend to be there for me when i need a hand to hold.

    nice poem! ! !

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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (11/29/2008 8:14:00 PM)

    Thie eloquent cry for companionship echos around the world. You are speaking for the masses. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • (11/29/2008 2:22:00 PM)

    fantastic poem

    i add- MORE PLEASE :)
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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (11/28/2008 9:39:00 PM)

    ' i wanna hold your hands..........i wanna hold your hands ' there goes the famous song from the Beetles.Hopin someones would be with you soon to kill your loneliness.Nice works Bastos. (Report) Reply

  • (11/28/2008 8:37:00 AM)

    Lighting a candle to brighten your world...lovely but so heartfelt...thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 28, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, January 9, 2009

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