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Please

Rating: 4.9

Hold my hand,
Please, hold it,
I feel lonely, very lonely,
I want a friend hand, confident,
So that I can go ahead.
Hold me!
Hug me!
Sometimes I feel myself falling down,
Twisting with my solitude,
I shout, nobody answers,
Only the nigth, with its silence
And its darkness
Just a star shining,
As wanting to show,
The way to tread.
I walk lonely, as in the past,
Sobbing as always.
I feel cold in my soul,
Just a tear calm me down.
Lonely, very lonely! ...
My heart complains
Please! Listen to my scream!
Hold my hand,
Please, hold it! ...



UMBELINA FROTA
Tradução – Nelson Francisco de Andrade

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
brittany 01 December 2008

awwwwwwww. that's so cool. thats how i write when i want a great friend to be there for me when i need a hand to hold. :) nice poem! ! ! brittany

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<font color =fusha>Amy 29 November 2008

fantastic poem i add- MORE PLEASE :)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

' i wanna hold your hands..........i wanna hold your hands ' there goes the famous song from the Beetles.Hopin someones would be with you soon to kill your loneliness.Nice works Bastos.

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Fiona Davidson 28 November 2008

Lighting a candle to brighten your world...lovely but so heartfelt...thank you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2019

A kind request is done to hold hand in tender love twisting solitude. Sometimes you feel that you fall down but in love you feel that you are not lonely and you have got companion and friend has caught your hand. This is an excellent poem.10

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Chuck Petz 18 December 2008

Wonderful work.Engenders feelings of protection and concern.

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Jerry Hughes 07 December 2008

.......................poignant and beautifully written by a mature mind. Cheers, Jerry

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 04 December 2008

your heartprint, touching love poem, thanks for sharing

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*Trusting You* 01 December 2008

My heart complains Please! Listen to my scream! great lines... people will hear just wait and see.good job. Crystal

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