If you could believe me please
my pain is so pure
Even the thought of hurting you
hurts me several times more.
So how could i made you
so far from my heart
When you know you were
of me an inseparable part.
A day without you was
like a day without sun
A night without you was
like darkness which was dumb.
I am still the crazy one
whose life was you
Every moment so worthy
just because of you.
My promises, my words
they all were true,
My love, my care
was just for you.
How could i hurt the heart
whom i loved like such
Please come back home
I miss you so much.
When you know you were of me an inseparable part. Very nice lines, such a beautiful poem!
Narration of emotion with intensity of deep hope and love. Something sad and some hidden wish was pouring into a beautiful poem. Well done...! ! !
What a fantastic poem! I really enjoyed reading it, and though this poem a sad, love poem there was a line that, for me, seemed to less the pain. 'A night without you was like darkness which was dumb.' I really liked reading this poem and I can't wait to read the others.
Very romantic and the pain is evident from each and every word., Great!
A love story describe in word...Last few line is simply awsum...well written and keep it up...
very nice... really touching... ' How could i hurt the heart whom i loved like such Please come back home I miss you so much.'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent poem... Well written