please, don't give me peaches
the peaches are too sweet to be true
please, don't give me smiles
the smiles don't feel true real
please don't give me love
the love does not mean anything if you don't mean
please, give me your shoulders
there upon I at least can lean
that gesture
is a gesture of love
that love is pure that comes straight from your caring heart
how do I know that?
love needs no words
love only needs deeds
that you have shown
that I have now known....
© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Sunday 23 August 2020
Thank you so much dear Asimji for your thoughtfull responses so true! You captured my poem so well and exactly what I mean. God's Blessings, Asimji
Thank you so much dear Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir for your valuable precious response. God resides in our caring heart, exactly right, Sir. God's Blessings
Thank you so much dear Varsha for your ardent introvert response. I most appreciate that. God's Blessings
To ask for lending shoulder is greater and bigger than all wealth on earth. Only those who love snd care will do that. During this corona time people are scared to touch, shake hands, give hug hence it become more so special when someone offer his or her shoulder. A thoughtful Poem. 100++
Love needs good deeds. Love really needs no word. We have to beautify life with dignity and righteousness. True love comes from God.Every soul loves lean in the arm of God. Inner feeling is expressed well in this splendid poem. Unconditional and selfless love motivates life with greater responsibility. This poem is excellently penned...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is really a very good expression. A very emotional and real expression. Every one should read. Thank-you for these words.