Cool was the night but hot from inside
Clouds whispered to the wind
I will come to you as rain
Night snuggled close to the breeze
drenched by rain
When they met everything freezed
and fire dropped down reaching the cliffs
The pleasure within the core
gave earth her offsprings
Night snuggled close to the breeze drenched by rain, ............ Wow! ! ! ! ! so romantic and cute poem, thanks for sharing, ++++++ 10
A beautifully crafted metaphoric write. Love is intensified by nature. Great piece.10
I too will freeze and be frozen like snowy trees and you leave all on the far banks of the river all alone and all wish to go along with you alone where is the mirror of thine where in I can find a face like mine You are a speedier poet all know leaving us on the river banks on the opposite side none can with out your help survive and it's no surmise tis the losers enterprise
I find intense love between cloud and wind! Lovely poem Rini!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice imagery, very well penned......................................................
Thank you so much Akhtar ji..