Pleasure Poem by Rini Shibu

Pleasure

Rating: 5.0


Cool was the night but hot from inside
Clouds whispered to the wind
I will come to you as rain
Night snuggled close to the breeze
drenched by rain
When they met everything freezed
and fire dropped down reaching the cliffs
The pleasure within the core
gave earth her offsprings

Thursday, December 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,pleasure
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 30 December 2017

A nice imagery, very well penned......................................................

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Rini Shibu 30 December 2017

Thank you so much Akhtar ji..

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Muzahidul Reza 29 December 2017

Night snuggled close to the breeze drenched by rain, ............ Wow! ! ! ! ! so romantic and cute poem, thanks for sharing, ++++++ 10

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Rini Shibu 29 December 2017

Thanks Reza for your visit Rini

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2017

A beautifully crafted metaphoric write. Love is intensified by nature. Great piece.10

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Rini Shibu 29 December 2017

Thanks Rose for posting your remarks Rini

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 December 2017

I too will freeze and be frozen like snowy trees and you leave all on the far banks of the river all alone and all wish to go along with you alone where is the mirror of thine where in I can find a face like mine You are a speedier poet all know leaving us on the river banks on the opposite side none can with out your help survive and it's no surmise tis the losers enterprise

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Rini Shibu 29 December 2017

Thanks for your wonderful comment dear poet

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 December 2017

I find intense love between cloud and wind! Lovely poem Rini!

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Rini Shibu 28 December 2017

Thanks Dillip..

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