Planet Of Snow Poem by Rini Shibu

Planet Of Snow

Rating: 5.0


I have a story to tell
The story of a girl
A girl like snow
Who melts in your love
So kind at heart
From her heart you can't depart
If she is the cold snowy morning
You will be like mist around
The sun envies her beauty
But she is always our sweety
So soft like cotton candy
Her smile makes all happy
she is the words in poetry
alive in the minds of you and me

Sunday, December 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 December 2017

Such a lovely write about poetry. It captures the wonders of having a creative mind..10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2022

The sun envies her beauty But she is always our sweety So soft like cotton candy Her smile makes all happy....lovely expression. A beautiful poem dear Rini. Top marks!

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Rebecca Navarre 23 December 2017

An Ever So Beautifully Painted! ! ! ! ! Heart Touching Poem! ! ! ! ! Filled With Beauty! ! ! ! ! Awe! ! ! ! ! And Heart Shown! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rini Shibu 25 December 2017

Thanks Rebecca..

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 December 2017

A lovely poem so highly metaphoric...poetry can be so delicately treated as a girl, a girl of snow. Loved the marvel of art through your pen, Rini. 10+++++ Subhas (From Sanjukta's laptop)

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Rini Shibu 20 December 2017

Thanks Subhas for reading and commenting

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 December 2017

Hi Rini, Lovely write. Using the metaphor of A girl like snow, you have portrayed a magnificent picture of the actual object of the poem: POETRY! Very skillfully done. Congrats. A 100+++

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Rini Shibu 19 December 2017

Thank you so much Unnikrishnan for reviewing

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Akhtar Jawad 18 December 2017

she is the words in poetry alive in the minds of you and me a great poem on poetry, loved it.

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Rini Shibu 18 December 2017

Thanks Akhtar..

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