I have a story to tell
The story of a girl
A girl like snow
Who melts in your love
So kind at heart
From her heart you can't depart
If she is the cold snowy morning
You will be like mist around
The sun envies her beauty
But she is always our sweety
So soft like cotton candy
Her smile makes all happy
she is the words in poetry
alive in the minds of you and me
The sun envies her beauty But she is always our sweety So soft like cotton candy Her smile makes all happy....lovely expression. A beautiful poem dear Rini. Top marks!
An Ever So Beautifully Painted! ! ! ! ! Heart Touching Poem! ! ! ! ! Filled With Beauty! ! ! ! ! Awe! ! ! ! ! And Heart Shown! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
A lovely poem so highly metaphoric...poetry can be so delicately treated as a girl, a girl of snow. Loved the marvel of art through your pen, Rini. 10+++++ Subhas (From Sanjukta's laptop)
Hi Rini, Lovely write. Using the metaphor of A girl like snow, you have portrayed a magnificent picture of the actual object of the poem: POETRY! Very skillfully done. Congrats. A 100+++
she is the words in poetry alive in the minds of you and me a great poem on poetry, loved it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a lovely write about poetry. It captures the wonders of having a creative mind..10