Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,400 Points (India)

Poem Of The Blue Eyes - Poem by Vishal Sharma

My long little life longs for your little love
the unforgetable touch and for the gentle kiss
the meadow of the dusk, and that love of dawn
do you remember my last days when we been together,
when sun shines pouring his love on every creature
do you know, I will vanish to a point, without you
and the relief is provided by peeping into the blue eyes,
the magical magnetic moment, hearby to you sweet
and, being your instance, i mearly play the violin
that music belongs to that pure heart that enchant love
my soulmate, my heaven gate, my life mate
why are you making me so wait,
you know how i feel being away from you
a promise life long, in the form of my heart songs
and you know, to whom these songs belong.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

after a long gap, tried writing a love piece
hope it has taken its shape

Comments about Poem Of The Blue Eyes by Vishal Sharma

  • Heather Wilkins (7/10/2013 3:02:00 PM)

    a sweet write on love. nicely penned. you know to whom this song belongs (Report) Reply

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  • David Wood (7/9/2013 2:45:00 PM)

    A lovely poem on love wanting and waiting. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • (7/9/2013 10:09:00 AM)

    Absolutely a heart-warming nice poem Vishal.Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Jenie Franksay (7/9/2013 12:32:00 AM)

    good write. but i dnt think she has blue eyes.
    her eyes are black
    (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (7/8/2013 8:50:00 PM)

    Still having great grasp in the name of love, you wrote in special way..i guess i know why it get named like this.Keep writing in whatever shape you want, call this as experimental art_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 9, 2013

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