Poetic Love Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

Poetic Love

Rating: 3.3


The heart rose to catch a figment of the cloud
Covering you from my visions sight
my thudding heart looks on in anticipation......
Will you scoop down and lift me into your arms?

Gentle kiss me till my arms curl around you?
And I close my eyes to pinch of reality and lift my lips to you?
How I long you fly into my life........
Adding my love to your passion
To compete with the jealous Moon
And the passionate ocean
As they fuse on a bed of high waves dancing
To music of the omnipotent!

The clock strikes midnight!
Love in its wedded moment so right!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malinikadir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 February 2009

a lovely artistic poem as in many of your poems involving the omnipotent..and even as a single soul one with the omnipotent it would be possible to compete with the moon

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~ Jon London ~ 06 March 2009

A beautiful soul created these fine and tender lines...Lovely thoughts 10

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Myrtle Thomas 26 March 2009

This is as love should be fresh and full of zest for the one you love.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 July 2009

To compete with the jealous Moon And the passionate ocean As they fuse on a bed of high waves dancing To music of the omnipotent! .................................. ..... .beauty of love bestirs by passion overwhelmed cry of heart croons lashing over sands of blue, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , most passionate write, heart rejoices by luscious glow, yet ingenious write, by the very beauty of love,10++, thanks for sharing

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C. P. Sharma 04 June 2009

Malini, your Poetic Love so shines I can feel in it the love shades divine CP

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 May 2009

'The clock strikes midnight! Love in its wedded moment so right! ' Another beautiful poem.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 28 April 2009

you are truly sweet warm and very graceful! u captivate me so! amazing write!

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Kesav Easwaran 22 April 2009

romantic passionate...the beauty of your write lies inviting in your moon flooded poem bed lines...thanks...10

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