stop playing like you love when you really dont,
stop playing like you gone do when you really wont.
a bunch of temptation no inspiration,
gotta rest up for what there's no celebration.
no one has sympathy, no one cares,
and if no one cares why in the world are we here.
friends going through things that i cant help em though,
im going through things and my friend is too.
the rope to heaven is right there but i cant latch on,
the train is right infront but i cant catch on.
Im tryna help but i cant seem to get it right,
so once its all said n dont i welcome you to poetry night
Love the passion of your poem...Be strong! Dorothy Alves Holmes A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Girl i'm feelin this i can also relate! ! Man this world crazy!
I loved your poem. All of what you said was honest and real. It was raw feeling without hesitation. That was awsome :)
ahhh i like the way you write i think i will write a poem just for you rite now thanks for the insperation
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like the flow of words, really great i must say.