Powder Cake Poem by Amy Kerswell

Powder Cake

Rating: 5.0


Im a powder cake
About to crumble
About to go to crums
About to blow

Im like a resembelence
Of a powder cake
Weak and feeble

Im like ice
Waiting to melt
My feelings frozen.

Im a powder cake
aiting to explode
Im lonely and trapped
Depression rules my life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laura Green 23 August 2006

I like this one. Nice use of imagery

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Duncan Wyllie 05 July 2006

This is so fragile and so sad, and yet the poem has an individual style and content Love Duncan X

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