Pray For Me Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Pray For Me

Rating: 5.0


When you whisper the melody of your tears
Among green prayers of your hands for years
Pray for me
I'm deaf and blind but kind, remove my fears
I want your love, my love my eyes my ears

(2008/9/4)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Koyel Mitra 10 September 2008

Excellent, spiritual poem.A full 10 for you.

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Chitra - 08 September 2008

spiritual in tone, deep thinking here

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mashallah... you're really a poet with this poem short but awesome...thanks for sharing.. best regards, joan d.h.

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Sarah Abdullah 06 September 2008

When you whisper the melody of your tears Among green prayers of your hands for years Very Good and the prayers Are for every living Soul on Earth Thx for sharing ^_^

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 September 2008

We all pray for you my friend. This is very touching piece from you

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 14 January 2009

Yet another great write from you and it seems so sincere too. Keep up the good work. :)

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toruk macto 24 September 2008

I love how it rhymes... :)

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Patricia Bankhead 19 September 2008

Wonderful write! We all need prayers. Thanks for sharing. Pat~

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... ... 17 September 2008

I like it because it sounds musical. Lovely writing! Miss you!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 September 2008

A wonderful short poem: Pray for me. Very nice.

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