A Coquettish Smile Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

A Coquettish Smile

Rating: 3.2


Large shadows loomed
On my heart
I was unable
To dispel the gloom

After loosing my love
Utterly
A blood of despair
Filled the room

Abruptly
A sunflower came
Removed
The horrible
Sense of doom

Casting the rays of hope
On my heart
Everywhere
Roses in bloom

When she smiles
Coquettishly
My heart begins to beat
With a soundless boom

(2008/7/24)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 24 July 2008

You found light at the end of the tunnel, a well-penned optimistic poem Nightingale, 10 Lynda xx

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C. P. Sharma 24 July 2008

A self expressive and very well composed poem. Correct me if I understood wrongly I would say: She is sweet, She is all smiles; Her innocent smile Can take you miles. After darkness, There is sun shine; Your courtyard flower Gives you new love line. Peels of her laughter Fill you with joy, You can play safe With the divine toy. In her you realize The fulfillment of life, She brings you out of The life’s all strife. You call it bliss, Or call it boom; It silently enters Into your room. God bless her.

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Thad Wilk 24 July 2008

An elegant read here, with the message of hope, that will remove this gloom! *10*! best regards Friend Thad

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... ... 24 July 2008

Stunning! So beautiful, hun! I'm back, my nightingale! ((hugs))

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Seema Chowdhury 24 July 2008

a nice love poem. well done.

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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'When she smiles Coquettishly' Rachel Ann Butler

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Jihad T 17 January 2009

Amire you took all the words and i'm running out of saying nice nice nice i like hidden feeling

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sumaira .....ir 07 January 2009

Nice! Keep doing ur gud work!

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iop fga 08 December 2008

This made my heart race.

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Tsira Goge 01 September 2008

Nightingale, You hearts shines with boundless kindness and love, fine poems....10... Tsira

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