A Coquettish Smile Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

A Coquettish Smile

Rating: 3.2


Large shadows loomed
On my heart
I was unable
To dispel the gloom

After loosing my love
Utterly
A blood of despair
Filled the room

Abruptly
A sunflower came
Removed
The horrible
Sense of doom

Casting the rays of hope
On my heart
Everywhere
Roses in bloom

When she smiles
Coquettishly
My heart begins to beat
With a soundless boom

(2008/7/24)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Victoria Dame 03 August 2008

I like your style of writing and I loved the ray of hope you left us with. Thanks for sharing!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 August 2008

Amazing verses indeed........10+

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Flora Gillingham 01 August 2008

A beautiful, inspiring poem from the heart! Fx

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 July 2008

chariots of angels coming to your site, along with the one, you loved so much.........and you live happily ever after.spark the air with your love, my friend.

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Seema Chowdhury 24 July 2008

a nice love poem. well done.

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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'When she smiles Coquettishly' Rachel Ann Butler

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Jihad T 17 January 2009

Amire you took all the words and i'm running out of saying nice nice nice i like hidden feeling

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sumaira .....ir 07 January 2009

Nice! Keep doing ur gud work!

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iop fga 08 December 2008

This made my heart race.

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Tsira Goge 01 September 2008

Nightingale, You hearts shines with boundless kindness and love, fine poems....10... Tsira

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