Precious Poem by Tarun Sharma

Precious

Rating: 4.9


i guess
i don't have enough time
to tame the beautiful springs
round the globe
that says time is precious

i feel
i don't have enough age
to walk the weather
round the globe
that says life is precious

i think
i don't have enough money
to buy all luxuries
invented round the globe
that says money is precious

i know
i don't take chances
to achieve all goals
aimed round the globe
that says ambition is precious

i mean
i kin spend all of 'em
to give you few moments of smile
round your face
that says nothing is precious but you

a number of flowers die before being smelt
a number of diamonds lay hidden for not been findin' out
how kin then they become precious
precious is the one what i have got in my small life
to live with.. to live with..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 30 November 2008

precious things are something as subtle and surreal as a smile with which no riches can compare wonderful thoughts

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Some things in life can't be compared to material goods... and they are most valuable gifts to behold... Truly beautiful write...

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Ency Bearis 30 November 2008

great thoughts and expressed well...precious gifts should be kept with sentiments.... Ency Bearis

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 November 2008

I see so many precious things in these few lines. Nice write

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Aijaz Asif 04 December 2008

yes so true and surely there's nothing precious then yourself and the person who you love....a very beautiful and inspiring wirte thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif

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Linda Winchell 30 November 2008

Bravo! Beautful. Linda

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 November 2008

Precious should be spelt as value over life.......and thats precious! ! Excellent works Tarun.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 30 November 2008

precious thoughts; precious poetry. very well done.......10

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Reshma Ramesh 30 November 2008

superb.....well done..! ! 10! !

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