Precise Times Poem by Soran M. H
Precise Times
O The abandoned cat!
Here in this empty path
who is more melancholic than you?
sitting perplexed on the bin
wondering and gazing at the grass
heading out to test life
from a broken wall..
life's a dishonest lover
first embracing,
colouring it in a green dress
but when it fades into yellow
turning her face from it
the biological clock and
the world's clock are different
but both give a precise time
when you wake at 2.00am
you know something is wrong
when the world's clock
sinks the sun
into a cold grey evening
listen carefully
to the departure bell that rings.
Thanks Kostas of course time has got very big impact on human beings life, either negatively or positively, even though we do not know the secret of time.. well done...ευχαριστώ afgarsto
you are a brilliant poet that is why you liked my poem, the beauty is in the eye of the beholder, many thanks again
Dear poet valsa; Hello...Your excellent and distinctive reading brings the soul back to this abandoned poetry. I wish you a good health, happiness and success
Seeing the lush green colour, one might long to jump down into the greens like the cat. But by the time we land there, we come to realize that the green colour has changed and faded into withering yellow. When we stand confused, life turns her back like a dishonest lover! What a wealth of meaning! Profound! Top marks!
life's a dishonest lover first embracing, colouring it in a green dress but when it fades into yellow turning her face from it.................. Indeed life is a dishonest lover, never stable but fickle and unpredictable!
The poem and the image that goes with it, both are beautiful and convey some deep and profound philosophy of life. Yes, time is precise and there is nothing so accurate as time though biological time and clock time, (we shall rather call it temporal time) are different.
Dear poet Rose Marie Juan-austin Hello and thanks Always your intelligence reading enrich the text and opining another door for better understanding, only the professional poet and critic can write such amazing comments, much appreciating with a kind regards
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I would like to translate this poem
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Empty path! ! Abandoned cat! ! Lonely, Watching the clock, As time moves on. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you for your reading, definitely you have picked up the essence parts of this poem, and this only can be done by the great poets and serious readers, Kind Regards Dear Poet..and thanks again for your time and reading..