Dark Shadows, purple and black,
Threaten us from Tall Trees lining both sides of
The dirt trail. Trees, like crossing-guard
Sentinels, tunnel us onward,
Step after Step, down the Endless Road.
We Shuffle ahead, hundreds of feet, kicking dust
Over well-worn, muddy shoes like a herd, bumping
Together in a weary procession. Birds of Prey
Hover at the rear, hoping for fallen Stragglers.
Hidden Faces, with their sniper-slit eyes,
Hide High in the Branches. Gun barrels glint, aiming
Downward, and the smell of Fear rises from the Herd.
Onward, Onward, the road winds.
Just the next bend ahead, no end in Sight.
No Returning, No Beginning, No Ending.
Just the Tall Trees and Dark Shadows,
Purple and Black, Push the Herd Forward.
This is indeed a chilling piece, moving along with the dread and grim pace of the forced march. We are drawn in and share the waning of hope attendant to each heavy step. Thank you for sharing this piece with us, good poet. :)
Excellent poetical scenography of conditions in extremes.
Excellent poem. Excellent imagery - so filled with somber mystery, shadowed with fear, read with dread. Your words were simple yet, strung together, were a complexity straight out of a harrowing period of time. Your closing, quite properly, does no closing because these hate-fueled actions continue through every period of history. Mankind just doesn't live up to its name- it is NOT kind to man. We gnaw off our own hands and feet.. Thank you for sharing this incredible writing- it certainly deserves to be published for more people to read.
I can't believe I hadn't seen this yet. Very powerful foreboding imagery and a great metaphor for the refugee experience overall. I've had those kinds of feelings in the woods, though not with a herd. Only when I am alone. I grew up hiking in the woods and playing in them all the time. Your childhood memory is chilling to me. This is a well done poem Marianne. Thanks for sharing and for your author's note.
I sometimes get scared in the woods, thinking I'm being followed by a bear. Your dream sounds terrifying, but at least you're not alone. There must be a small measure of comfort in that. An endless forced-march is exactly the type of thing nightmares are made out of- -I can imagine you feel the weariness in your legs as you dream... Terrific poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very interesting dream and poem. My poem for the e-book is simply titled Refugee. Your approach to meld the dream and reality is very provocative.
Thanks Barry. Looking forward to the ebook's publication. Sometimes I feel as if poets and artists are banging their heads against brick walls, but we keep spreading messages. Maybe something will stick! Marianne Larsen Reninger