Prima Facie Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Prima Facie

Rating: 5.0


My black rose,
I like to caress
your soft petals.
savoury pollen
stolen my soul.
like to jump
over the fence.
Oh! the gardener with the spade
is crueller than the prickly shrubs.
I like to hide in the garden secretly
my little haughty
naughty bee request a nod.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 06 April 2006

Honest emotion, skillful imagery. A very provocative poem, Nimal. Regards, Sandra

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David Tanguay 06 April 2006

A nod to the bee, is a signal to sting the gardner. than the black rose is all yours

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Duncan Wyllie 06 April 2006

Will a wink do when the bee smiles at you ; o) Love Duncan

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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