Prison Planet Poem by suzan gumush

Prison Planet

Rating: 4.0


Why all those wars!
Why all those dramas!
Why should life
Have to be a living problem!
Only we make them....
We created them!
The list goes on....and on....and on!
Planet Earth has become a living prison
We've encaged ourselves
Within a world full of Lies
Which is the right way
No one really knows
Because we forgot
How real living grows

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pied Piper Berry 04 September 2008

This poem speak a truth on several levels. It is a good write, and another 10

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Ency Bearis 04 September 2008

truistic verses...same inquisitive thought I have and I sympathize with you... Ency Bearis

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Robert Howard 05 September 2008

All I can say is, I agree. My chorus at Webster University is singing a piece whose text contains a very similar message. It is very important today to constantly stand up for the fundamental truth that war is an unnecessary evil.

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Adeline Foster 27 May 2016

Good write! Which is the right way, so many do ask and still ask. We were given a manual that few read, and many fear to read, it is in there should we but search. Good poem! Read mine - I Have Delighted - Adeline

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C H Sund 13 October 2008

Great ending, made the poem.

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Dr Kamran Haider 05 October 2008

I must say you have a visionary and unpolluted soul…

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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 09 September 2008

wow, i love the last line

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Lee Crowell 06 September 2008

just getting familiar with your work and saw this is a recent one, nice job...I like it

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