Problems And Pebbles Poem by Aniruddha Pathak
Problems And Pebbles
Ah pebble, just a pebble,
Pray spare such derision,
It can hold enough treason.
If you hold it high and nigh
And close to your seeing eye,
It blocks your entire vision.
But at arms' length from your eyes,
You see its shape, colour and size,
And feel free from own prison.
Now, drop it at your feet,
You can walk over it.
Learn to follow due reason.
A problem's like a pebble,
And to see so if able,
Solve it; let it simmer, nor season.
A pebble can cause you to tumble,
A growing problem would not crumble,
Split it into handy division.
And yet at a problem on hand,
Ostrich like we dig into sand,
Problem goes, feelings nor frisson! !
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Reflections |10.06.2019|
A problem's like a pebble, And to see so if able, Solve it; let it simmer, nor season.....outstanding conceptualization. It is really a beautiful poem on problem and pebble. Thanks for sharing.
Yes, a problem is often neglected like a pebble in the path. Thank you for appreciating it.
A wonderful poem imbued with wisdom and insight. So beautifully written.
Ah pebble, just a pebble, Pray spare such derision, It can hold enough treason. If you hold it high and nigh And close to your seeing eye, It blocks your entire vision. - - - - - -A nice metaphor for problems of life.I too have written a poem on 'Pebble', but it is from a different context.
Thank you dear poet for the feedback. I'll certainly read your 'Pebble' and revert.
Problems of love and life! ! Living on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/9/2024 6:31:14 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A pebble can cause you to tumble, A growing problem would not crumble, Split it into handy division....brilliant expression sir! Thoroughly enjoyed the poem..............10
Thank you dear poet for your appreciation that goes a long way.