Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 109,630 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Promise Me To Love After End Of Time - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

My time,
your time,
both are mortal,
so,
why do you promise to love till the end of time,
why don't you promise to love after end of time?
time is relative,
it's an illusion!
God created love,
the noble metal,
that doesn't dissolve in acids of hate,
but the satanic thief,
stole the formula of Aqua Regia,
the acid of hate,
conquered the time,
dissolved the noble metal,
and the love till the end of time has been blended!
we will be dead,
time will be dead,
satanic formulas will be dead,
when there will be no time,
all will be dead,
it's love only love,
that is immortal.
Here you say your lovely face,
is better than that of mine,
and I say I have more grace.
When time will be dead,
we shall see all the faces are faces of beauty,
and beauty that has no beginning no end,
will appear as a smile on our lips,
a smile or a laughter on our ignorance,
that dominates all our thinking,
beliefs and emotions,
and then we shall love each other,
in the true sense,
a love not blended, insoluble,
as Aqua Regia of hate will also be dead.
So,
promise me sweetheart to love,
after end of time.

Topic(s) of this poem: hatred, love, time


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Ftom Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Aqua regia
nitric acid hydrochloride
Other names
aqua regis, nitrohydrochloric acid
HNO3+3 HCl
Appearance red, yellow or gold fuming liquid
Aqua regia (Latin, lit. 'royal water' or 'king's water') is a mixture of nitric acid and hydrochloric acid, [1] optimally in a molar ratio of 1: 3. Aqua regia is a yellow-orange fuming liquid. Aqua regia was so named because it can dissolve the noble metals gold and platinum. However, titanium, iridium, ruthenium, rhenium, tantalum, niobium, hafnium, osmium and rhodium are capable of withstanding its corrosive properties.[2]

Comments about Promise Me To Love After End Of Time by Akhtar Jawad

  • Amitava Sur (11/15/2015 8:35:00 PM)


    Very affirmatively you have expressed and emphasized on the firmness of LOVE which is ever glowing and what exists timelessly. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (11/13/2015 3:59:00 AM)


    so strong it should last forever
    thanks
    (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/13/2015 2:12:00 AM)


    Time of life and love both are mortal as per specificity of living in this material world. This is a very deeply drafted thought provoking poem shared. Promising love is always good in sharing...10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/13/2015 12:56:00 AM)


    Love is a powerful force. The earth needs more of it. Thanks, Akhtar
    And thanks for the notes too
    (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/12/2015 9:51:00 PM)


    God created love,
    the noble metal,
    that doesn't dissolve in acids of hate,

    Love these lines.....! Yes, true love is immortal and extends beyond time! A great write!
    (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/12/2015 12:55:00 PM)


    Hats off to you, Sir. You have taken an inter-disciplinary approach to define what love is in terms of time or in terms of life or after-life, promises apart. Thanks a lot for such a wonderful poem.
    God created love,
    the noble metal,
    that doesn't dissolve in acids of hate,
    (Report) Reply

Read all 6 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags


Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 12, 2015



[Report Error]