Prophetic Vision Poem by Xelam Kan™

Prophetic Vision

Rating: 5.0


Night;
With a thousands sparkling eyes
Is watching and listening
the wailing and cries.Of
suffering beings:
Faraway from Heaven`s bliss.

God sent many a time
The mighty souls
with glowing minds:
To teach their fellow men
The lesson of love and hate from sin.

His mercy to save men
from false crave.But
for our lewd hearts
In vain all
such holy thoughts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 01 November 2012

So strong and great. prophetic vision is the door to humanity and it's criterias. but it's hard to find a nice and shark penning.

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Hazel Durham 31 October 2012

A thought provoking poem, about the afterlife and redemption, we can change our lives around with God's help!

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Jahan Zeb 01 November 2012

That is quite a meaningful poem. We need to know God's will. He definitely wants us to be human. The poem very rhythmic and the flow is wonderful. The words are strong like the message. All the lines are gathered to convey the message. No single sentence can be regarded the best of all. Good Work Gulsher.

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Dimitrios Galanis 17 January 2016

In symbolic terms to be taken even for a non beleiver, like me, it cathes the achievement of human existence to give itself a reason to fight for a better world.

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Babatunde Aremu 19 November 2012

The end rhyme is sonorous. I like the theme. Great work.

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Anita Sehgal 05 November 2012

very touching and powerful!

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Wahab Abdul 04 November 2012

very good poem... i like for the style..

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Free Bird 03 November 2012

so nice and thanks for sharing :) do read my poem too

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