A single hawk flies cold above the flowers,
Momentum quickly focused by the hour.
The mood requires warm bones against the frost,
Before the pattern is forever lost.
The shadow of pure flight hallows the ground,
Song fitly joined together without sound.
Veering is elegant against the pane.
Friend, time turns west upon that sunset plane.
A stunning piece. The drama of your words impacts the soul. My Best, Mary
Lovely piece, the freedom to soar on the wing, beautiful Love duncan X
'A sharp eye of the poetess who captures a lonely bird is flying in a sunset. This is another rare song indeed of the fading twilight' Your observation is great in the mysterious sky. Take care my friend.
sandraji, that hawk is nothing but your soul... and the flight, i love to call it: poetry..........
a visual treat to the mind...trying to recreate the scenery through your fine poem...a treat
Your words pure magic as they capture the lone flight of the hawk and drops a poem into your hands..thank you Sandra - the hawk, my favourite
You capture the solitary nature of your hawk with skill and grace in this majestic poem about the passing of time and the beauty of the seasons. I also pick up an emotional sub plot of regret and sweet sadness. Masterful poetry. love, Allie xxxx
Many moods and images are captured here - so many poets have praised this work, I merely wish to echo their thoughts. 'Warm bones against the frost' is what the spirit requires, always - the sun always westers, forever. - Will
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sandra, visually stunning... simply 'pure' poetry! Brian