Put It Right Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Put It Right

Rating: 5.0


You've got to do what is right
before it breaks your heart
your losing everything
before your very eyes

The things you heard
the things you saw
the things you know
you knew and you know
that it's not right
it's now time to let it all out

Put things right
heal your heart
a life is waiting
for you to start

Just put it right

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Some people hold things in for so long, they forget
how to live.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 16 December 2012

Be kind, be strong but always admit when wrong, then move on., a thoughtful write Dave.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 27 November 2012

Nice advice! One shouldn't hold things for long. In this context I wish if you could find time to go through my poem-I Can Forget It- which reflects the same seed of thought. Well written.Thanks and best wishes, Chandra Thiagarajan

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Valerie Dohren 20 November 2012

We should put things right with ourselves, but it isn't always easy to let go. Great advice.

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Jahan Zeb 20 November 2012

We are gifted with the gift of immense intellects. Well written. Put it wright before it is too late. you knew and you know that it's not right it's now time to let it all out Excellent

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 November 2012

very inspirational! well done!

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